Tuesday, August 7, 2007

middle of the night

not quite day
no where close
but maybe here
the time after
after midnight
before the sun
even crosses your

mind
maybe here
we can finally
breath
the hardest part
of writing
the words
the hardest part
of love letting

go
the hardest part
of breathing
the space
in-between...

2 comments:

Joey said...

I want to criticise you, (to tear you apart into pieces with utterly straight and interlocking edges perfect for a simple reassembly into an apparently identical Final Product) trust me on this.

But I do not have the time and the power to concentrate that all of this requires and deserves.

So a limping apology for now and an instruction to ait.

Joey said...

to wait